Hey readers i know you might of looked at the title and then started reading this so i hope you enjoy it.This slide has data about the olympics so i hope it could be useful to you guys so you learn more.I worked hard on it and that is why i am hoping you liked it.I wanna give all the credit to viliami F for doing most of the work.
Hi Semisi. We like the way you presented your slides and wrote the facts on top. This reminded us of when we compared the Olympic games to other traditional games. Next time maybe change the transparency on your images so we can read the text easily. From Kea @ Wesley Primary School.
ReplyDeleteHi Semisi, I like how your slides give us information and are interesting. It reminded me of watching the olympics. Next time you could use capital I and capital letters at the start of a name. From Isla
ReplyDeleteKia ora Isla,thank you for helping me i will correct that when I have the time.Thanks
ReplyDeleteI like your slides a lot! I never new some stuff in there
ReplyDeleteFROM MRS A @ NWS
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Semisi
I liked how you acknowledged Viliami F in your text for helping you with your presentation. Did you know there is also the Para Olympics which is currently being held. New Zealand has been doing well in getting some of the medals.
I wonder if you could use a capital "I" when you are talking about yourself in your next blog. I look forward to reading your next blog. From Mrs A
Hi Semisi,
ReplyDeleteI loved you're olympic slides.
It was really amazing.
I learnt some sports from you're slides.
whats you're fav sport.
Bye!