Hello readers I hope you guys like this post because I have been working hard to make this so I hope you enjoy it.
Chapter 1 (its a picture prompt)
I woke up early in the morning and tip toed to the bathroom to brush my teeth,right after that I felt more fresh then a mint.Then I slapped on some sunscreen and then slipped on my life jacket.Could you tell where I was going?If you guessed fishing then you are correct but of course I was not going alone be cause I was going with my dad anyway Dad and I carried the row boat out of the garage and put it on the boat trailer.While dad was strapping the boat onto the boat trailer I quickly ran into the garage before it could close and grabbed the paddles.Then we were on our way to the wharf.To be continued....
Kia ora Semisi,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you made this into a story instead of just describing the picture. This reminds me of when I did this (yours is much better than mine :).
Next time you could add spaces after the full stops so the punctuation is corect.
Hello Isla,
ReplyDeletethanks for commenting on my blog.
Hi Semisi,
ReplyDeleteI like how descriptive it is. It also has tons of similes.Good job!
Thank you Ananya for commenting on my blog.
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